Angelic remedies,
erased a life time of-
painful memories.
Creating wonderful,
heavenly melodies-
playing everywhere.
Author notes
picture credit - DesWalsh@photobucket.com - 15 Words
A contest entry
- Quickie 20 Poets 15 Words Exactly by Poppa by poppa.
1050 points, ended April 12, 2008, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Immortal execution for the brain
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makes me think of an old woman going to heaven as the little girl she once was, I like that image...
Congrats on the bronze!
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Aww.. just lovely!! What an uplifting poem this is... just like a soft whisper~
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh to be touched by angels. Great take on the prompt. Fantastic poetry!
Best wishes in life.
Peace in light and love
Noah
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beautifully said. It has that softness that is like the angels kiss. Well done my sweety pie!! I am loving this piece. Best of luck in the contest
Mel
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A sweet, serene piece of writing.. A beautiful interpretation of the picture. Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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Beautiful words to accompany a beautiful image.
You bring out the finesse in the prompt pic, and make it easy to see where your thoughts were on this one.
Best of luck in the contest.
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Oh very nicely done!! Beautiful take off the picture. I love the song that this sing to one's heart!
Beautiful! I wish you all the best in the contest!
Jasminerose
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