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Awakened

Angelic remedies,
erased a life time of-
painful memories.

 

Creating wonderful,
heavenly melodies- 
playing everywhere.

 

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picture credit - DesWalsh@photobucket.com - 15 Words

A contest entry

Immortal execution for the brain

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  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    April 12, 2008

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    makes me think of an old woman going to heaven as the little girl she once was, I like that image... Congrats on the bronze!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    Aww.. just lovely!! What an uplifting poem this is... just like a soft whisper~


  • Three Doves
    April 12, 2008

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    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh to be touched by angels. Great take on the prompt. Fantastic poetry!
    Best wishes in life.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah


  • luckynsincere
    April 11, 2008

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    beautifully said. It has that softness that is like the angels kiss. Well done my sweety pie!! I am loving this piece. Best of luck in the contest

    Mel


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    April 11, 2008

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    A sweet, serene piece of writing.. A beautiful interpretation of the picture. Good luck in the contest.
    Soulful Woman


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    April 11, 2008

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    Beautiful words to accompany a beautiful image.

    You bring out the finesse in the prompt pic, and make it easy to see where your thoughts were on this one.

    Best of luck in the contest.


  • jasminerose
    April 11, 2008

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    Oh very nicely done!! Beautiful take off the picture. I love the song that this sing to one's heart!
    Beautiful! I wish you all the best in the contest!
    Jasminerose

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