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Daddy

Don't You know I'm your little girl?
Are we going to pretend I can fly today like we did yesterday?
Do you have to work late again today cause I want you to stay.
Don't I get my kiss before you go dont forget my hug.
Your the best daddy and I cant wait for you to get home so I can get my next hug.

is it any good please comment so i know

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  • julia17
    April 11, 2008
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    aww i really like this one


  • Ace13
    April 11, 2008
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    another random poem.