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no pen can describe...

So enchanting a kiss gives not the rising sun
To those little drops of silvery dew
That rest on the roses, waiting to run
and come back again tonight anew.
Nor shines the silver moon half so bright
Somewhere far away in the silent night skies;
As your unrivaled smile doth appears to my sight
And gives me pride, for having seen you with my eyes.
Your smile shines in every moment of my bliss
And your beauty blazes in every ode that I write
You appear to me in everything, - in that- and in this-
No wonder why for lovers all world appears bright.
O queen of loveliness, how far your beauty does excel,
No pen can describe; nor the tongue of any mortal tell

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  • WhiteAngelCake
    April 16, 2008

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    Hm... good question. Do I like it? It was good. I never heard one like that before. Good job!

    -Beyond Da` (Awsome) Craziness