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Flashbulb Tentacles

Wrap me
Illuminated by your arms
The bright rounds
Distorted borders but clear deepness
Your winged extensions can grasp me
Glowing supplicants beyond that gray shape
Only shadowed by itself
Let me touch you and shine
Like those neon butterflies

Author notes

http://i257.photobucket.com/albums/hh216/jackiee1970/dark.jpg?t=1207895946 <- Used as a prompt. Sucked.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 11, 2008
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    A lot of depth in this... and a sense of yearning! Very well done.
    Thank you for the entry!