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I Love You For Reading My Poems.


Whoever you are reading my poems,
I love you!
The comments left behind,
your reaction to mine.
They are like roses thrown to Olympic figure ice skater.
What else can I say!?
For that alone,
I love you!
Every piece I have written,
bares little bits of my soul.
It's me all down on paper.
I hope your feeling what I have opened up to you.
God!
I love you!
I'll do my best to keep you.
I couldn't of found a better mate.
A hit and run reader?
Maybe a fan!
It doesn't matter to me.
Since, I love you!

Audrey Evans
4/10/2008

A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • wave picture frame
    July 5, 2008
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    Uplifting.. LOVE!

    this is a beautiful and refreshing outlook that i can't get enough of. if the world was full of stuff like this, there would be no war and hate and stuff keep writing exactly as you are my friend. Love to you! -Jamie


    • AudreyEvans
      July 17, 2008
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      Thank you for your support and comment on my poem "I Love You For Reading My Poems.". I kind of was joking around when I wrote this peice, pretending that I had a publishing deal and this would be my intro to my book. One of the top 10 selling poetry books of all time, naturally.
      Thanks again.

      Audrey Palmer
      aka rubyvaroom


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 28, 2008

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    Wow this poem is very loveable. I love you also lol . thanks for entering my contest iwish you the best of luck.
    ..<3..
    Shelly


  • myron silver member
    June 28, 2008

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    interesting concept

    Ah yes, the unconditional yet somehow flippant love of a poet aching for readers. What an interesting concept!

    Good luck in the contest!

    I think this line may read better if you included an article before "Olympic":

    They are like roses thrown to Olympic figure ice skater.

    Best wishes,
    Myron.

  • wendymolly
    June 7, 2008

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    Awesomely well said in every way, full of much Love, Promise and always as it seems in heart and your soul,
    Genuine Wisdom!!! Your a contest Finalist!!! Good Luck and always Take Care!!!
    ~pithyAplomb.

    • AudreyEvans
      June 14, 2008
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      Thank you for reading and enjoying my poem enough to place it with your finalists choices. I loved your contest carney call. I felt that you'd might respond to it in a positive way, or not at all. Anyway I'm honored with your words and support.
      Audrey Evans


  • DawnKestrel
    June 2, 2008

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    Nice!
    Good luck in my contest!

    • AudreyEvans
      June 14, 2008
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      Hi again and once again, thank you for your support and your to the point comment. I mean one word comments can be the best or worst reviews a writer has to deal with. So, thank you!
      Audrey Evans


  • imagineart
    June 1, 2008
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    I'm a fan to be sure...here's a rose...you olympic skater you....

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