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Rainbow Reverie

Under the fire of winter wishes
chilling the heat within,
soothing burnt heart,
delighting you  giving happy  time –
flying are colorful butterfly-dreams.
To wise little Princess’s burning desires:
“Wait for magical moments and
watch flames turning into variegated wings.”

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Prompt : Picture (author unknown)
in no more than 40 words

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 11, 2008

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    Aww that was sweet! Such depth in your words and expressed wonderfully!
    Thank you for the entry


  • Venugopal gold member
    April 11, 2008

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    Fine poem of a bride in waiting.Let your sweet feelings flow now and then after dear Shree. Best of luck in the contest...Venuji