Give your heart to me and
I will create beauty
Show your soul to me and
I will show you a world like no other
I am your love, your life
I am everything that you have strived for
I create....
Author notes
Picture prompt
(artist unknown)
40 Words..
A contest entry
- Another Overnight Quickie (PIF) - Pic Prompt by kiwigirljacks.
850 points, ended April 12, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be gentle!!
Comments
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Ahhh that was beautiful! Giving with such an open heart is the only way to love in my opinion.
Thank you for the entry!
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hmmmm....i wonder if "deep as fuck" is an actual expression lol....i will say however that this poem emotes and exuberates the deepest of love that someone has for another...like going to the "ends of the earth" for that one true love and showing them the wonders that all life has to offer. this is truly a wonderful piece and i wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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a good piece of poetry you have penned - love creates life and twists spirits into crazy shapes, good luck in the contest.
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Thank you very much for your comment.. And you are right, love can do that.. again thank you..
Jetleena
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Excellent
Beautiful write. You have a wonderful way of expression my friend
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Thank you very much.. I'm so glad that you liked it...
Jetleena
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i think this is cool as fuck, its short, enigmatic and deep inner deep 'cos this is like thoughts yee never had but you were able to write them down...sweet - domz
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Thank you very much.. I'm glad that you liked it so much..
Jetleena
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