what can i do when you're not there,
you can't catch me when the world's unfair,
without your help i fall apart,
but you're always in my heart,
not talking to you is the hardest thing for me,
keeping you in my world is my priority,
without you i don't know what id do,
the thing that keeps me going is my love for you,
yyou're my everything and no one else matters,
because you're the one that's there when my world shatters.
A contest entry
- Non Winning Pre-Write/End line Rhyme Only by piccola.
600 points, ended April 12, 2008, 36 entries
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Comments
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Very simple and to the point. The rhyme is ok..in line nine there is a typo that spell check could have caught
it is yyou're ...you should correct it since this is for a contest. thank you for the entry
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