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[ hungry speckled bird ]

hungry speckled bird
feeding on juicy berries
fermentation high

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Picture Credit: enquiries@wildlife-art-paintings

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  • Arkbear gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    Hi Polly :)

    The aha moment pulled this all together........I do wish you had told me what I could not see, per say the Rules, but yes, this is a lovely KU' with perfect count of course ~

     

    I would have liked to of seen a different Title, but some don't seem to mind using a line twice :)

     

    Nice job Sir and God bless,

     

    Bear ~


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 16, 2008

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    Simply lovely I found myself smiling so calmly reading this beautiful Haiku ... adorable imagery

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Samplette gold member
    April 11, 2008

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    Wine anyone? Very nice "aha" moment in this. It brings the whole haiku together. Very well crafted haiku.
    Sam


  • islekine gold member
    April 11, 2008
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    I got a good chuckle from this!

    Best wishes in the contest!
    Write on.
    *PEACE*