Damned actions,
glimpse of pain,
shattered structure,
broken day
Words spoken,
releasing Rage,
Stress filled token,
of actions staged
Moment of stillness,
before fury shouts,
terror of another,
disgusted bouts
verbal scorn,
for visible rage,
explained not,
by stress or age
Realized fear,
Over what's been done,
Sorrowed torment,
On the run
Silent stance,
Under weight,
Of judgment eyes,
for family's sake...
Comments
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A very well written piece.. Duty to the family can be a heavy burden to carry sometimes...A very beautiful write full of pain and yet understanding for the meaning in that pain.. Well done..
Maeve
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Wow.. This was so intense and your emotions behind what you have written was so amazingly strong.. I really don't know what to say.. But this was a sad read for me.. The hurt in it was there, don't know if thats how you felt or feel but thats what I got out of this.. Great write..
Jetleena
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