On my knees
In years
Sorry for leaving
Not trusting
Only fearing
On my own
Battling this world
Clinging to the knife
To thoughts of death
Coming to the end
Where the end
Was in sight
It was then
That your hand
Reached down
To protect me
From myself
Till I could see
Clear
That I need you
On my own
Is not the way to go
It is you, My LORD
That I need
Please help me
To never forget that
I love you
My rescuer!
Please tell me what you think
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hey there thanks so much for the comment dear I really appreciate it
!!!! I actually have been doing better and the fact that you have over come all of these things has inspired me for I am in the same situation God has helped me a lot too beautiful poem keep up the great work ^_^!!!!
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"On my knees
In years
Sorry for leaving
Not trusting
Only fearing
On my own"
I like that even though the poem starts out on a sad note that there are positive feelings at the end! Blessed Be! -
That I need you
On my own
Is not the way to go
I'm not into poems about god,
but this piece was nice.
good write
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This poem was so deep it touched the depths of the sea and my heart, which has been proven to sink pretty low
But seriously, well done on a brilliant write. I love the way it looks like it's coming out of the side. but i guess that's just left align for you. Wonderful allusion to your love for God.
Blessed be.
Well done,
Chin up
Swim.x -
The structure of this poem makes a really powerful statement that only emphasizes the meaning of the poem. I love the religious theme and I can relate to this poem very well. I've been close to a total breakdown and learned to turn back to my faith. Great write and thanks for sharing.
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Ah..this is indeed a piece from the heart ..with a complete honesty..and innocence of the heart..well done....
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Hmm...very spiritual and emotional that's for sure. i really did enjoy it. and i do know how that feels to be in such pain...and then you have your rescuer. well done!
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