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Find that magic

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reach into that pentacle
that circle of life
wherein you find that your path has just begun
interwoven within those mysteries where
memories unfold
can you see past those dreams
where they were given  as a gift
those secrets that are waiting to be discovered?
seek that wisdom that touches within the soul
listen to your muse
that whispers upon your heart
reach deep within
and find those true paths that never take one astray
and touch those blessings
sheltered in joy
find that magic that comes only once in a lifetime.

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  • Words of wisdom you penned here... very inspiring and thought-provoking.

    "reach deep within
    and find those true paths that never take one astray
    and touch those blessings
    sheltered in joy
    find that magic that comes only once in a lifetime."

    Makes me long for this, for some sort of enlightenment...

    Great write.

  • Wise words that are indeed fodder for thought,brings into focus the errant paths one often wanders....great poem

  • Sigh... Oh I so wish I could reach inside and find those true paths... yet I feel trapped!

    This is a wonderfully inspirational write!

  • If this were entered in a contest called "Say 'cut through the B.S.' in the most wise and poetic way possible', it would take gold for sure. And Lord knows there's plenty of B.S. in this world to cut through. This is great advice for anyone, and it gets better and stronger the older and more cynical and/or disillusioned we become. Excellent work.

    Mark


  • Sprite silver member
    May 2

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    This is lovely. The sentiment is wonderful. Listening to anyone is a lost art, I am afraid. When we listen with our intuitive nature rather than our heads we will find the correct path. Yes!


  • Desire gold member
    April 27

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    Brilliant!!

    Love the message You have brought forth and the words of Wisdom You have enlightened us with

    Magnificent!!
    can you see past those dreams
    where they were given as a gift
    those secrets that are waiting to be discovered?
    These lines grab...Makes one think

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Slay Aiken
    April 19

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    Tres inspirational, especially for such a younger user as I. I haven't been commenting in a while, and I'm glad that the first thing I comment is something as good as this. Kudos.

  • beautiful words! i could read that over and over again! bravo!

  • AWESOME!!!

    You nailed this, I love it. "reach into that pentacle
    that circle of life" I wear a pentacle & a tree of life! "seek that wisdom that touches within the soul" No one really wants to open their hearts or minds to it, we are labeled evil no matter whether we are white or grey, or even black.. who so ever chooses that path, not me! "find that magic that comes only once in a lifetime." I have been wiccan my entire life, I just had to learn how to channel it all. It comes from within. It isn't something you can really learn about, endless you read about it. But I do every once in awhile for I am not perfect! Thank you for sharing! In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~ (Oh and you do know the real me! I have you on my space) But it isn't this profile.

  • Just4u
    April 12
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    Very true thoughts kind of flows around what I always say about "We have nothing to learn, only things to unveil, for all that we seek is already inside and has been since the beginning."

    So many seek outside for what already exists within. A journey of a thousand miles that could have been taken
    within a single thought.

    Have a great weekend...

    Eddy

  • This is really good. I like it and even though it doesnt rhyme, it has its own way of capturing the mind! Great write!

  • When I look into my life I see many paths I could of, should of taken...finding the right path with the perfect magic does only happen once in a lifetime.thank you for sharing~Blessings always~ Trisha


  • Nephlim
    April 10

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    I really liked the ending line, it's almost sad in a way, that the magic will only come once. A very positive poem, I like the words you used together!
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly
    A+wesome

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