So I'll wear this hollow smile to hide the pain in my eyes.
You will see the sun shining but there are clouds in my skies.
And I'm broken, lost, alone but I know I wont cry
Because I'm numb every time that you say goodbye.
Goodbye.
Goodbye.
Goodbye.
Yeah when you say goodbye.
The only time I'm happy is when i look in your eyes.
A smile on your face can make the sun rise.
But the sun it stops shining when you say good bye.
Goodbye.
Goodbye.
When you say goodbye.
Yeah when you say goodbye.
Now call me what you will just don't think that I lie.
With every I love you that I cant deny.
Its no lie.
No lie.
No lie.
I wont tell you a lie.
Now every breath I take is a pain that I hate.
This life is not worth living if you ain't in it.
So I'll walk around smiling like its all ok.
But who knows where I'll stand at the end of the day.
Today.
I wont lie.
No way.
Don't say goodbye.
Goodbye.
please tell me what you think of this. hold nothing back.
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weird
this poem made me real confused because did he cheat to leave? what is happening in the poem? what did you feel when you wrote the poem? -
WOW!!!
wow gurl uve got style!! really deep i like it... could be a good song too if u add some music to it... cool
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wow.
this is really deep
great write=]

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amazing
that was really good. i love it :] -
off the chain awsome
i agree with Rocker Boy and i also add PUBLISH THIS IS SO GOOD PUBLISH IT PUBLISH IT so good so awsome

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You have no idea how wonderfully amazing i think this poem is... as a matter of fact... can i talk to you about this one? Lets just say i see something in it that has a lot of potential.


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