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Only You

Never felt like this before
Thought it was just a crush
Crush
I was wrong
It wasn't JUST a crush
It was LOVE
Realized the sadness in my heart when you were gone
Then the happiness in the air when he smiled
The lightness I felt
The way my heart skipped a beat when I see you
It can't be explained
Never expected that I would love you
Someone who always used to forget my name
I just wish...
I had met you before...
You met her...

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    April 11, 2008

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    this is pretty good, the repetetive words he and i strict to the rule of poetry, nice over all job on this keep it up..
    Lin