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Acid Cries

puddles of god seep into my soul
i embrace it letting it know i'm here

that i'm not just a figment of imagination

i am real

i am living

god cries from the heavens

sinking into my utter chaos

called my mind

conjuring up devious destruction

causing my downfall

my demise

 

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i chose picture 1

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    April 16, 2008

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    WoW! your words are really powerful and stir the emotions softly...really good! Niaish so much for sharing with me and for entering


  • named.disaster--x
    April 14, 2008
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    great write!


  • sillsill44
    April 12, 2008
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    what did i do wrong


  • Misery into Melody
    April 12, 2008
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    You have some spelling mistakes.

  • piccola silver member
    April 11, 2008
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    nice take on the prompt. thank you for this entry.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 10, 2008
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    Clappies didn't work


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 10, 2008
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    Fabulous take on Picture One!
    Unique and strong

    Best of luck
    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda

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