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Muffled Screams

Its been almost a year since i fell in your trap,
and oh how close i was to falling in that.
I can still feel the shiver of your breath down my neck,
I can still feel you pulling me into your lap.

Your voice whispering in my ears?
Couldn't you see my eyes making tears,
You didn't care you made my friend get out..
Told your buddy's to go on look out.

You took your hand and ran it up my leg,
the words you had said still burned in my head.
You took advantage of my sudden fear,
you moved in close and nibbled my ear.

I tried and tried to get my hands free,
and yet you took hold and again kissed me,
my scream grew loud and you tried to go up my skirt,
Thank god for the friend who came in and pulled me away
from the hurt.

No one knows how far you went,
I never told a soul exept God to repent.
None of my friend were told the whole truth..
I was yet to afraid you would come back and try to get through...

No matter how many showers i took to make the stench go away,
the presence still remains up to the day.





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.....Written by the girl who almost had him

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 30, 2008
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    I can relate to this in many ways, my ex was an abusive guy and although he wasn't violent he coerced, pinned and manipulated, playing on my fears and I still have nightmares about him and we broke up nearly a year ago. Also this weekend someones older brother and a friend took advantage of me & I feel dirty and filthy, so this is really relatable.


  • crystallynnbradford
    June 18, 2008
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    ...know the feeling....just hope this wasn't true....thank god for the friend


  • Poetic Obscenity
    April 24, 2008

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    Love, This is not on the topic of the contest, however it is a very amazing and heart felt piece. For that, i refuse to DQ it. It had great flow, but there were a few spelling/punctuation errors, though i seriously don't mind. It didn't take away from the piece at all.

    This is very sad and what's worse is that so many girls can relate. An amazing piece as i said before. Thank you.

    "No matter how many showers i took to make the stench go away,
    the presence still remains up to the day." That's what really encaptures this piece.

    I really hope this hasn't happened to you but i can really feel, that it has. I hope you know i'm here for you if you ever need to talk. No one should go through this or any problem in life alone.

    I'm sure if you let your friends know they'd kick his ass and hold you tight. -hugs-

    Great piece. Heartfelt. Relatable. Thank you for your entry.

    Good Luck In The Contest.

    ~IvoRy


  • Forever in his arms
    April 18, 2008

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    I really wish you'd change that...written by the girl that almost had him

    What is this? is this truth?
    how come everytime I read your poems I feel lost and more alone then before? How come?
    Very lovely wording...
    However I want to know the truth...I dnt like lies katie...
    Or maybe I should....never mind....
    *thinking out loud*
    This couldnt be from camp... It never went...
    and If no one new the whole truth...the person who pulled you away had to... And Why am i thinking this much?
    why didnt you come to church wens?
    ....I have to tell you something...
    Quite weird u wrote this poem...
    Its been almost a year since he...

    ....he was at church...
    and no im not talking about ben.....

    "its been almost a year..."
    I freaked out katie I freaked out....i almost cried


  • bleedingheart91
    April 11, 2008
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    My my.... so beautiful!!!! I love it!!! >.< I saw it in my mind!! lol ^-^

  • NotSoPerfect
    April 10, 2008

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    Wow. I can relate to this. Was it a parental figure, or just someone you knew? I'm here if you ever want to talk. Sometimes it's easier to talk to someone you don't know.


  • Lightningpaladin
    April 10, 2008
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    very stong. a few grammer errors, but it doesn't matter. this is a great piece, with great power

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