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Please Stop Your Crying

To much stress taking over
Is she going to be okay?
Why is her hair falling out?
PLEASE STOP!!
Sleep for me!
Tie your hands back
Don't scratch your skin
For me please stop
Your scaring me
You're all I have left
It hurts me
I can't do anything
I see the scars
And the scabs
You're always hurting
I can't take it anymore
I see the hair in your hands
And the blood on your sheets
So much blood...
I would trade you anyday
Just to see you smile again
I would take all your pain
I want you to be okay
Please stop your scratching
It kills me to hear
I know you scratch
Till you have nothing left
Hands and feet rough
Tears in my eyes
I cry myself to sleep
Everynight now
I think of you
I think of your pain
I want it to be over
For it to be over with
It's making me sick
I can't eat anymore
Almost all I can think about
Is your pain
It makes me feel selfish
I'm sick too
Yours is worse
I want to be sick
You don't
Give it to me
Live your life
Be happy
I know you can't
It kills me inside
To see my little sister
Be in pain like you are
Brandy I LOVE YOU!
I'll do all I can
To make you better
GET BETTER!!
Your my best friend
Please
Stop your crying
I am here

Author notes

This is about my little sister, not even a month after writing this we found out that she had hodgkins lymphoma cancer. she is now better now

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  • Kappa Pyua
    May 5, 2008
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    Tears!

    It is nice to hear that she is doing better, We shall always pray for a cure, but god gives a challenge to all who can over come them, and sometimes the challenge is not for those who suffer must, to to those who surround them to give the love and support, I'm sure she knows that you love her! A wonderful piece for your sister.


  • nobodys-girl
    May 4, 2008

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    im so glad that she's better. my little brother is my very best friend and i think it would kill me if he got sick. this was very well written, it made me cry : ) thankyou so much for entering my contest and the best of luck!