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Silent Stories

Silent stories,
of untold horror.
Violent thoughts,
out of order.
Out of place,
Skin on skin.
Desperate screams,
No one hears them.
Heartbroken.
Scared and timid.
No one can repair
What he did.
Ice cold,
Tears start to fall.
Heart hurts,
Too much to crawl.
On the floor boards.
Eyes are closed.
Fighting the nightmares,
No one else knows.

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  • Whispered Lullabies
    September 3, 2008

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    I not only feel the pain of what he did, but the anger is rolling off your tongue CK! lol.

    It's really good.


  • Fallen-Phases
    August 24, 2008

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    Beautiful

    i love this piece.
    i realate to it perfectly having gone through that sorrt of thing myself, and this is an amazing description of the exact pain, i love it.