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where I want to be

waves crash on by
as we walk through the sand,
hand in hand.


when I look in his eyes,
and kiss his soft lips,
time stands still.


as the sun sets
and the day starts to die,
I know that our love is real.

Author notes

had to write a poem with only one syllable words for poetry.

this is for you Sweetie.
I love you with all my heart.

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  • MetalMason
    April 10, 2008
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    I LOVE IT HUNNY!!! i love you