Sipping culpability
from grandma's inheritance
I added more sugar ~
stirring...
A contest entry
- 10-10-13 Quickie Contest [10 words, 10 minutes, 13 entries] by blackday.
700 points, ended April 10, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I really like where you took the prompt. Nice write. J
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Had to go look at the prompt... and wow, you have done a fantastic job with that... as you always do!
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Ahhhhhhh yes.
This has to be one of the more interesting metaphors I've seen from the contest. The ending was lingering, but strong.
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Oh wow. That is such a great metaphor. Wonderful take on the prompt.
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w00t!
You go.
Best of luck -
This is wonderful, I love where you took the prompt
(and it was one of those hard ones too!)
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good luck
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Thank you... x
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