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Forgotten Dinner



Half-eaten steak-

candles still burning.

Our clothes on floor-

Urgent



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10 word quickie
Prompt is "dirty china"

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    April 11, 2008
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    We must have sat at the same table....


  • blackday
    April 10, 2008

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    One word: sexyyyyyyyyyyyyy. lmao.

    This is like, erotic-quickie style [no pun intended] & I really liked it. :]


  • pantress silver member
    April 10, 2008

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    I love the way your mind works. me, I would have thought I needed to do the dishes that are piling up in the sink, lol. My pet peeve.

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    April 10, 2008
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    lol. perfect.