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[ a golden sunrise ]

a golden sunrise
meandering breeze scatters
the meadow lark’s notes

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Oh, a traditional one my dear!

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A contest entry

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  • NeonRose
    April 18, 2008
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    pretty picture, pretty poem...I love it. Congratulations on your HM


  • Arkbear gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    Hi Susie :)

    Oh yes....the aha moment is wonderful....I knew you would give me somethingto really partake ~

     

    However, it is a *Song Thrush, not a Meadow Lark :)

     

    Either way, you used the picture as your prompt and that is what I asked for......lovely job.....thank you for taking the time to enter and God bless,

     

    Bear ~


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 16, 2008
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    ~sigh~
    Blissfully lovely

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Samplette gold member
    April 11, 2008

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    Your haiku paints a very vivid and beautiful picture. I really like the second line. Best wishes in the contest.
    Sam


  • islekine gold member
    April 11, 2008
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    Well penned!

    Best wishes in the contest!
    Write on and on...
    *PEACE*


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    April 11, 2008

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    Lovely response to the target picture, Well Done!

    Dennis

  • almostgone
    April 10, 2008

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    and a beautiful traditional one at that. it just breathes of summertime, and none too soon after this ridiculous snow that we had. best of luck in the contest!

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