I am,
a pupil
of imagination
pen in hand,
to an
empty brook
the pond now stirs,
outside my
window
a swan is born,
and the lily
…ripples…
Author notes
I dont know if this is cliche or far from the edge...it is, however some of the many thoughts I have about my own writing..
"Grammy Awards for Winners participent"
Option; What poetry means to me
A contest entry
- Open Theme- 500th Contest by CarolDesjarlais.
1200 points, ended April 12, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I loved this. your poetry opened a window where I could peeked into your thoughts.
all the best.
Becks
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woot woot congratulations on your award.
a gimps within your wonderful soul.
Nice work here
Love and Light
Frozentearz
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This is beautiful and truely you writing...wonderful metaphor and the ending was amazing...you are truely such a tender and delicate writer of words...
congrat's on the well deserved Gold!
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Oh, so worthy of winning gold~ fabulous write!!!
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Absolutely beautiful. Congratulations on your Gold
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Omg, simply stunning....tender, fragile and absolutely gorgeous iamgery here.... the stream feeding the brook, stirring the pond, moving the swan......what an iamge filled me as I read this..your words are powerful.
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i think this is just fine.
it expresses what you feel about
writing. good luck in the contest,
mally...your words are always
extraordinary. Love, Lane
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Mally, you always make it look so easy and complicated at the same time. I love how this lays out! I have always admired your fine writing skills!
Best of wishes,
Frogz~
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No obvious clichés here, my friend, just a gentle and lovely nod to the Muse. "Pupil of imagination" is an apt phrase--that's exactly what we all are in this game of poetry. Well done.
Bill
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I loved this. Did not find it cliche at all. I thought it was an honest view of yourself and your work. I think you did a fantastic job in describing your thoughts and writings. I happen to enjoy them very much.
Soulful Woman
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this not a cliche' but a well thought out piece about your visions in poetry, a beautiful swan lets ones mind envision what to te a bout , good luck...
Lin
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