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China's Taboo

Weeping porcelain dolls,
naked in stalls,
bounced,
on rubber balls.




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Prompt: dirty china (10 words)

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  • Arizona Sunset
    April 11, 2008
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    congrats on the hm lot said for ten words...~Trisha~

  • Virgoan
    April 10, 2008
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    Nicely woven words.

    'naked in stalls' - loved that line

    thanks for sharing.


  • blackday
    April 10, 2008

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    Haha. Wowwwwwwww. Um, I'm not sure as if I should be blushing or laughing at this. I did like the naked in stalls though. It was an interesting tidbit, to say the least?

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    I am quite sure you didn't mean it this way but I did get a bit of a giggle, reminded me of my childhood.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 10, 2008
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    Nice rhyme

    Best of wishes


  • Age of Rain
    April 10, 2008
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    Very interesting take. Nice rhyming as well. Great job!


  • HeavenScent4U
    April 10, 2008
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    good luck

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