Press your lips to mine,
and taste my passion rising
from boiling desires
as tongues play
Unleash your hands
and strip me bare;
caress my curves
to plead for more
Scratch your name
across my flesh
and mold me
for a perfect fit
Twist my body
in hip aching want,
fill my need
and bring me bliss
Sink your teeth deep,
and mark your territory -
{my body}
as your own
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dark seduction is an art few can display without freaking the seductee out lol... i am in no way freaked out.. nice work..
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Good
Your word choices are clever, descriptive, and imaginative. Your simplest words can carry the most weight when you make the reader feel them and not just hear them. The author uses good imagery and maintains a poetic flow through the whole piece. I enjoyed reading this poem, it rings true, and real sexy.
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mmmm... yum! As much as you might hate me for this... the ending was expected! Oh but, I liked the whole write. Clear, sexy and needy (just enough)... quenched... "marked". <3 Alex
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alluring
a sensual write in good taste,
was captivated by the first stanza
you have a way with words Dy
nicely done
~.♥.~Rena~.♥.~
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Interesting words...
And,
Instinct generally calls me to mark territory.
Passion calls me to do more...
I like this one...
A lot.
grins.
-Saint
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I'm glad you like it.
After a comment you made to me about 'bliss'
and our conversation earlier today and the echoes of your growl in my ear, this is came to me
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My growls have that effect.
I don't like to sit back without sening a few echoes beyond time.
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Yes, your growls have an effect, a very good one too. Send them anytime
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Aye, I shall do that.
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*nips you and grins*
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