Molded glass
ferments
with memories
not suitable
for
human consumption.
Author notes
prmopt: dirty china
A contest entry
- 10-10-13 Quickie Contest [10 words, 10 minutes, 13 entries] by blackday.
700 points, ended April 10, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well it;s short !!
I think it's pretty good you have hti the nail on theprovercal head here ! Keep up the great work !
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Awesomeness
Congrats!
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Mmmm. Your line breaks were spot on, along with your pacing of the poem. It doesn't feel like 10 words. Love it. :]
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Very nicely done here. And a great to title to go along with it.
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Fer sizzle
w00t!
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