Like dreams under a storm
Paradise is a drifter’s realm
Author notes
http://kilara.deviantart.com/art/Drifting-with-the-Tides-82463316
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A contest entry
- 10x10 Pay it forward by Kari.
475 points, ended April 11, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Mania 3 by Celticmoon.
800 points, ended May 27, 2008, 49 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Paradise is all in the eyes of the beholder just as beauty is. One can only see what they wish to see but keep themselves limited far too often and are blinded to the truth of a paradise right before them. Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you.
Blessings
Bel
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Thanks Bel
Some may shout from the rooftops when paradise is found, while the real admirers just sits in silence and awe. Shhhhh.....
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This holds a quality of sensualism in it but at the same time speaks the truth
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Thanks Rae, glad you seen the related topic
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I enjoy brevity. Not anyone can turn a few words into an essay! Frans
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Thank you Frans, pleased you enjoyed this one.
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I can see why this has won a gold already..
You seem to have a gift for brevity that doesn't turn abstract.
Beautifully done.
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Thanks Suzanne,
I enjoyed this one and was amazed at its winning end.
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All I can say is this is just awesome indeed,you say it all in so little words and great picture
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Awesome write Mike I really like. Says so vry much in so few words. I love the picture as well. Congratulations on the win It is so awesome and thank you for sharing it with us
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congrats on your win!! GREAT entry! Lovely imagery!!
Always,
Mel
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Stunning write...Well done on the gold..well deserved...
Simon
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Oh Mike, this is just beautiful and amazing. You've said so much in so few words. Well done and best of luck
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dreams under the stroms of life, can leave one drifting yet if chosen can become a paradise...I really like this my Hetane!...you leave me much to think upon
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simple and specific
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and we can go anywhere that paradise seems fitting. Beauty in brevity. Love, C
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ah the drifters - we are all that i think, a good two liner penned here.
i was just curious who you were as i had not seen your name before so i thought i would visit
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Interesting concept - "Paradise is a drifter's realm."
Reading this I also liked the sound of the "m"s... gave it sort of a humming.
Marlene
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This is interesting. It has the feel of two different worlds or an alternative world. I like it. Good luck to you in the contest.
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