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[ waiting for the moment ]

waiting for the moment
when everything turns right
waiting for the person
to come turn on my light

nothing can hurt me
but everyone tries
and it always gets to me
which explains the midnight crys

crys you ask
yes I answer
for help
for love
for life

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    Very touching write

    Often many feels this very way and in their dreams they so want to just be loved to be noticed and cared for .Good write here .


  • Cat10
    April 11, 2008
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    once agian, a great poem