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Nature Girl

A spring wind blows
your breath on mine

Your halo glows
my life devine

Flowers bloom
my love for you

A star lit room
I fell into

Endless dreams
of you and I

Desire streams
in passions eye

Golden fields
wind swept hair

My heart yields
that I might share

Eternity
one more night

In my arms
will take flight

Author notes

I'm a 52 year old father of 4 and I would like to be your friend.

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  • calendar girl
    April 23, 2008
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    this is so sweet, it made me smile =]


  • Entwining Beauty
    April 23, 2008
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    Very beautiful poem thank you for entering


  • FallingTwilight
    April 13, 2008

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    Beautifully written, very heartfelt and sweet. I love the rhyming and short lines... both work well for this piece. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck,
    -Kaitlyn


  • risewiththesmoke
    April 12, 2008
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    awesome job rhyming. thanks for entering


  • nikkia
    April 10, 2008

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    this is a beautiful poem, the rhyming is great and it's so sentimental. awesome job! thanks for the entry and good luck

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