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God's message

My life is your love
your heart is my soul
When we are apart
God sends his message dove,
the essence of our minds,
the distance of our sanctuary of love
is never too far away.
He tells us to travel the journey to follow our dreams
i will always love you and the message god gave me for you.

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    May 2, 2008

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    Welcome To Ap

    Nice little Poem You have written here. Flows really well The content is great. You do have one "I" that is not capitalized and "G"od in the last line. But overall Excellent job. Your really talented for your Age. Keep up the excellent work.