Delicately perched
absorbing the world's beauty
Heaven: at last sighs.
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Tender brush-strokes etch
into the heart of mankind,
whilst melodies play.
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No longer confined,
freedom clenches flying wings
to the barked rest-stop.
...
Author notes
pic Credit: enquiries@wildlife-art-paintings.co.uk
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXVII by Arkbear.
450 points, ended April 17, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can see why this wears Gold! This is a gorgeous Haiku Chain... These little buggers aren't as easy to write as they would appear... And what a perfect picture too... the total package!!!
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Oh, lovely, lovely, Haiku...in series...beautiful. Congratulations on your Gold.
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Thanks so much for your comment
Mel
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Hi Sweets :)
A beautiful Chain of KU' lined up here, displaying perfect count ~
Not sure if you wanted *etch...or...*etched, but either way, it works :)
The Image plays the right tune....the Flow is flawless and the presentation is gorgeous ~
The first KU is wonderful and serene in thought ~
The second KU plays into the heart of the Reader, given freely from the Poet ~
The third KU...last two lines are the Da Bomb :) ....and, I found *confined* and freedom clenches* a tad bit of an oxymoron.....but that is good ~
Loved the vision you gave me and the aha moment,
....well done and God bless,
Bear ~
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Thanks so much Bear
Mel
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Oh so well penned!
Best wishes in the contest! (so far these are the best!)IMHO
Write on!
*PEACE*
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Thanks a million
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