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The Wacky World

When the sun rose,
It looked green as it rose!
My bed was all red!
The sky was all red too!
And suddenly I heard a joke~
And this is the joke~
"Knock Knock"
"Who's there?"
"Interupting cow"
"Interupting c-"
"MOOOOOOOOOO!!!!"


It was a WACKY WEDNESDAY!!!!




THE END

Author notes

My sister typed this for me while I told her what happpened. I hope you like it!
Jaz, the 6 year old

A contest entry

Is it good for a six year old?

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  • oceanlove
    December 7, 2008
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    ooh!

    wow,jaz! nice to see you and it sure is a wacky world!


  • SmartBrick
    April 12, 2008
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    I think so.You should be proud,kid!

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 11, 2008

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    This certainly is a wacky Wednesday. Great poem, Jaz. It was nice of your sister to type it for you. Thanks for sharing. You have a great talent.
    Brian


  • daviscth
    April 11, 2008

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    I love this, especially the last line! It was nice of your sister to type this for you, i'm so glad you posted in my contest. Thank you.