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[ looking back a us now, ]

looking back at us now,
i wonder if we did what was right,
with everything that's changed,
i see you in a different light.
you say i look happy,
i don't think you believe it's true,
i only wish you could know,
how much i've missed you.
i know i disappeared,
i just ran away,
and though i want to so badly,
i can't promise that i'll stay.
but boy do you look good,
i hope you're having fun,
but as for me,
you know i'm always on the run.

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haha wrote this in like 2 mins
to everyone i ran away from
im back : ) and im ready to change

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    this is sad and touching. very heartfelt. i must say though that in your first line, i believe that the "a" should be the word "at" and in line 9, "dissapeard" is actually spelled "disappeared". nicely penned though =]