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Delight

A shooting star on a crisp June night,
tickles your wonder and fills your eyes with Joy.

A bubble- blown by kids at the park, floats over to where you're reading,
You giggle at the shimmery reminders of a careless youth.

A homemade card and handpicked daisies tied with pink organza,
on the anniversary of when you lost your nana.

A cold splash as you cannonball into the neighbors pool,
it freezes you- just for a second, before you erupt into laughter.

A mug of gourmet hot cocoa and a chenille throw that nana knit,
warms you from within, encompassing you with love and security.

A brilliant butterfly flutters across the yard,
on a dreary gray day in January, a gift of hope from above. 







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Contest: Who Am I? Autobiographical

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  • movedon
    May 18, 2008
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    you should have won

    m


  • Randomly Beautiful
    April 24, 2008
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    Thank you for the entry. :f


  • She burns
    April 20, 2008

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    The invisible dream, existing for each and one of us, the magic, the memory, the unexplain, the mystery, life's beauty


  • Lowell Poe
    April 14, 2008
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    IM POOR...LOL

  • Lowell Poe
    April 14, 2008

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    This really encompasses warmth.
    This piece glows.
    It cracks and sparks all that is good.
    You captured something very special here.
    An arrangement of the human language that makes us all human.
    But it was a certain gypsy that was brought to mind..
    the only one who could bring herself to life through words.
    And make me smile.

    BEAUTIFUL LASSIE,
    BEAUTIFUL,
    LOWELL

  • Uglyblackdog
    April 13, 2008

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    You take me back in time

    I loved this poem because you take me back in time..back when I younger..very good writing!!! Great Imagery


  • AthenaTragedy
    April 13, 2008
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    Wow. This is extremely intriguing.

  • hscopazzi
    April 12, 2008
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    Great!!

    I loved this one!! Makes me think of college!!

    Harmony


  • Dygurl
    April 10, 2008
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    I like this, full of hope, and the great memories of the past. Nicely done.

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