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rhythmical song thrush
feeding on bright red berries
basking in glory
Author notes
Picture Credit: Credit: enquiries@wildlife-art-paintings.co.uk
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A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXVII by Arkbear.
450 points, ended April 17, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hey Pam :)
Absolutely loved your presentation ...along with perfect count.......but I do wish you had dug a little deeper and told me what I was not seeing, per say the Rules :)
Over-all...a very nice entry with gorgeous images and presentation ~
God bless,
Bear ~
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Well penned.
Best wishes in the contest.
Write on!
*PEACE*
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A perfect rhetorical match for the image. Just as the illustration holds tasty colors with warm hues, so does your composition.
You rock, young lady!
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What a beautiful haiku, Sam. You did a great job on this haiku, I like "basking in glory"
Cheryl
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oh... the words couldn't be more perfect for that picture! well done.
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I love it.
I love scenes like this one. I collect different prints for the house. Some I share with others when they need uplifting. The wording makes this all the more enjoyable.
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