The way that you drive too fast,
How you love your music loud-
The way you look when you're mad,
The way you stand out of any crowd.
How easy it is to make you annoyed,
The fact that you love to sing-
The way that you dress even for church,
The way that you never seem to miss anything.
The way that small town life confuses you,
Your habit of always being a little late-
You're old Bible that looks so worn out,
The way you hate being forced to wait.
These are just a few things I love about you,
There are many more that I did not name.
So I'll simply say that I love you,
And since knowing you, I'll never be the same.
A contest entry
- love poems {750 points for gold} by risewiththesmoke.
1000 points, ended April 23, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this made me smile. true love. thanks for entering
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This is a beautiful love poem! though the topic 'things I like about you' is kind of a cliché, you did a great job here putting your personal experience here and at the same time allowing people to relate to your writing (at least me!)
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