from your breath
that gives the birds their flight,
your tears that make the ocean,
your will;
sets the air alight.
your pulse;
gives the sea motion,
You are our mother earth
one we should revere
from birth,
surfing the turf,
of our creation.
Author notes
Credit White Buffalo Woman by Pam McCabe
A contest entry
- PIF Picture Prompt by Age of Rain.
600 points, ended May 2, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Simply beautiful with a flowing use of rhyme. Excellent work.
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Great wording!
I so agree...she is the only mother we have!!
Best wishes in the contest!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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"You are our mother earth
one we should revere
from birth,
surfing the turf,
of our creation."
beautiful
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beautiful with a great ending.
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those were the days in thr cradle of our love, those were the days i dream of sweetly... i am just singing, mother earth
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