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defying the impossible

dont go an try to change something
something thats supposed to be
i'm done with pertending that everythings okay
too late to turn around
too late to change me
so let me jump and be free
take a risk and let me go
rising above all let me
let me defy the impossible
this is a risk i'm willing to take
just.. let me be
let me be free

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  • Shortygirl
    April 13, 2008

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    well...this is the first poem of yours i read and so far i like it a lot...your poetry is awesome...good job

  • strawberryfields4
    April 12, 2008
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    i like it a lot and the background suits it so well too.


  • liduen silver member
    April 12, 2008

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    Great write, it flows very well and has so much emotion in it. Good luck in my contest and thank you for entering.