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[ Whispered Deaths ]

 

 

 

 




With scythe in hand, he skinned thick film
of insecurities off trembling flesh
to add within brew assimilated by conscious.

Made the paranoid polluted with compulsive
behaviors to attract unwanted attention;
turned up volume constantly so rabid voices
harped on the mundane.

Grim Reaper waited for pound, watched it
pulsate onto scale, prepared scolding cauldron.
Desired boiled fat in vat of lies simmered.

                     

Hurricanes held vigils, tornados turned threats
into reality, spread rumors of how many feet
to bury the brave ones who stood with backs
against bulls eye target.

They refused to die without Dignity~ 

          

Weak minded kept in cell of their own doing
as fear left its fingerprint on seven levels,
one from each finger,

and the severed three that remained
to be held hostage, used as leverage.



On bathroom stalls, names also serial numbers
branded on each head of human cattle
with hungry words lisped in private circles~
sharpened nails etched in flesh for all to read.


'Whisper my name once, come back for seconds'








Author notes

Happy Anniversary Sweet One
Love You for ALL You are
and I'm Blessed to have You
in my Life!!


Title Prompt~
c titles
whispered deaths

**Reference to seven levels:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seven_virtues


**Pictures courtesy of Photobucket...
First photo:
In_the_Mirror_by_AliceinDeadLand

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  • Lady Australis silver member
    April 20, 2008
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    oh grandmother
    i love it ty
    i love you


  • DrunkenRam
    April 19, 2008

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    whoa, there are some really obscure connotations listed here, I am all of a sudden grateful for being a Christian School Graduate.
    This is a seriously great poem, the pictures are awesome, the reference to the Seven Levels is attention grabbing in itself.
    Skillfully twisted my dear, nice job.


  • Amera gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    Oooooo! Your dark poetry is os captivating. I can't believe there aren't a thousand comments on this one. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera


  • penman gold member
    April 15, 2008
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    Excellent

    What a great creation sweetness. So awesome an amazing. Many blessings in the contest.