Take my hand
Im not going to let you do this
you stopped me once
and now i shall stop you
Dont you see
when you look up at the sky
the light does not yet shine on you
it is not your time to fly
you handsome
perfectly matched
whats wrong
did you follow the wrong path
I will not let you fall
I refuse to let you crash
just grab on tight
and you will no longer have to fight
I know this is hard
and i know you just want to give up
believe me i have been there once
and I know this must be tough
So step away from that bridge
dont look at your reflection
dont dive off that ledge
in to a pool of rejection
A contest entry
- Suicide Revelations by SchizoChic.
850 points, ended April 16, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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Very nice indeed. Great job.
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This poem is well written, and adequately describes the feelings of someone watching a friend in pain, wishing they could do something to intervene. Sometimes we need to lean on our friends to save ourselves, and I'm sure your friend is greatful to you.
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