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Tug of War

you spilled racism off the bible
and loaded slurs with hydrogen weapons

moscow is babylon in russian

anti-russo depictions in film
show girls bleeding and pregnant
and boys with erections smaller than thumbs
chanting about the end of the world
and the enigma code

while presidents build bombs


who can build the bigger bomb
while tchaikovsky serenades the world
with tales from the crypt
and nabokov writes pedophilia

on bathroom walls

biblical pages are stained in blood
and no longer usable

we fight wars over tobacco
proxy wars with jesus
[on their side]

while the world grows colder
and stalin gives the finger
to us [the U.S. of course]

[damn, egocentric eh]

migs fight caterpillars in craters
while bombs continue falling
into oceans of tar
pressing red buttons like children
to ignite the world

tension builds like
snapping rubber bands
and slaughter-house five

becomes an epic for describing
two children playing tug of war
hopefully no one will lose

Author notes

Sweet Melissa

I'm going to hell for this - I just thought you should know.

Oh, and I'm the tour guide, and I'm really hoping Dante was right. <3

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    Holy hell this is rich, thick and full bodied! Incredible piece.

    And honey, you won't be in hell, and if you are, I'll be right there with you.


  • xXxCry-HavocxXx
    April 10, 2008

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    wow, I like this!

    'anti-russo depictions in film
    show girls bleeding and pregnant
    and boys with erections smaller than thumbs
    chanting about the end of the world
    and the enigma code

    while presidents build bombs'

    Favorite part. Good write!


  • Oleander
    April 10, 2008
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    WOW! I feel I can relate to this.


  • individuality gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    anti-russo depictions in film
    show girls bleeding and pregnant
    and boys with erections smaller than thumbs
    chanting about the end of the world
    and the enigma code

    i loved this it was great,