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Wind Dancer

Deep inside my soul,
A shade darker than the rest.
Composed of the remains of animal life,
And the shredded bodies that could not pass the test.

I am part of this earth.
And through it I am free.
The wind caresses the dirt,
And through the particles I can see.

 

Together we act as one, 

The sun, the shade, and the rain.

Though I'm immoble,

I'm so beautiful I bring pain.

 

Touch me tender,

Take a whiff of my sent.

Relax with my beauty,

And a day well spent.

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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    April 15, 2008
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    Delicious and inspiring. A well penned piece, great work

  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    April 11, 2008
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    Very nice and earthy a sweet read indeed
    well done and good luck...


  • BluRosePoet8488
    April 10, 2008

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    Ashley,
    You certainly ran away with your imagaination on this. Well done. I like this one. Take care. Keep the ink flowing and good luck! Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~