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Glasses

I can't see the world.
You were given to me
So I could.

I rely on you
for my sight.
If I could see the world
I wouldn't need you.

If I would see the world,
It would be because
I want to see it.

Why do I rely on you
To show me a world
I don't what to see??

You don't show me why
I would want to see the world.
You don't improve my vision.

All you do
Is show me something
I never desired to see!!

You don't help me,
I don't need you.

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...hmmmm. I wrote this when I was really mad at my glasses... . A few words are repeated alot in here... but I think it's ok.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    Good muse here

    I never thought of writting about how my glasses make me see things I dont want to .This is great and so true