Without you I'm broken,
like a smashed piece of glass.
Broken in a thousand pieces,
broken in a million ways.
Nothing can hold me together,
nothing & nobody but you.
Where are you right now,
why did you have to go?
Sometimes I would doubt you,
then I'd hate myself for doing so.
Sometimes I would wonder,
what you're truly thinking about.
Fragile, like a piece of glass,
what are my feelings to you?
Anything and everything
is what I'd do to get you back.
I'd search the ocean bottom,
I'd even scale Mt. Everest.
I'd go anywhere to find you,
just to be in your arms again.
So many obstacles face me,
just like they faced us.
And we conquered them together,
but I don't know if I can alone.
I need your strength right now,
your the missing piece of my life.
My puzzle is incomplete,
incomplete, without you.
Did any parts sound awkward or forced and etc?
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pretty poetry Cali . HAts off to you my friend once again you have surprised me with yuour talent. please pardon my terrible spelling but it is the least of my worries my fingers so often slip but in any case well done.
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Thank you
and when will YOU next submit a piece of writing???
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cool
I love the flow in this poem it's really good,also the discriptives were awesome
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Thank you
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