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snake's sake

This is more dangerous than even a battlefield
45 days is the time they take to shed their shield
rats,fish and smaller snakes are their prey
you have cobras,pythons and the like in the fray
they are thin,lustrous and luscious
they make you afraid with a mere hiss-hiss
Its funny to see them mate
and everytime i do,i say goodluck mate
the only one to have seen a snake is my sister
you get bitten and you become late mister
they provide the much hyped anti-venom
which is a cure for a snake's venom
it falls under the clan of reptile
your high gets low if you watch them,having a cocktail
it bites its prey with its fangs
in 2010 you could hear scientists revealing even snake hangs
i like you i like you i love you
they are endangered and left are very few
from this poem,people take a cue
that snakes are better than animals that mew

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  • mcw120588
    October 18, 2008
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    ahh i hate snakes lol but well written


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 10, 2008
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    I have never had a pet snake, though I have held someone elses and held snakes in general. I have had rats however so know about people finding a pet 'disgusting' which of course they are not, very misunderstood. Besides, in Chinese Zodiac the snake is supposed to be a very clever, imaginative and insightful being [I'm a Snake!!!].