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Dirrrty

Boys and girls of every age
Wouldn't you like to do something stange?
Come with me and you'll be alive
But you're system you'll deprive.

For I give you a lifetime in a day...
Just do as I say...
run the lighter on the bottom of bowl
catch the smoke, lift your soul.

Never sleep, the living dead.
Get a bump when you're nodding your head.
Staying thin by starving yourself...
You're putting your dreams on the shelf.

Staying young forever and ever,
You become more and more clever.
For you are a slave to this shit
All because I made you take on hit.

it's not that great. written in about 5 mts.

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  • TenuousMemory
    April 18, 2008

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    AMAZING!!! you have no clue how badly i can relate to this poem. although its more like burning your dreams away as reality melts around you. the last stanza is the most meaningful and my favorite part!!