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Lovely Girl

She is like Spring Rain
Dancing like a fairy
Catching my eye
Her beautiful green eyes
Lovely, lush blonde hair flowing in the wind
Her dress, like emerald
Swirled around her like a spinning flower
Her feet are bare, her laughter like chiming bells
She beckons me with a light wave
I grasp her hand lightly, and I am drawn into her embrace
And we dance together amongst the dew
The light shining around us
Oh, what a feeling. . .Of peace.

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  • Bella Cullen
    September 12, 2008
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    i wish guys say me this way.


  • trekkergirl
    September 5, 2008
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    this is very nicely written. Thanks for joining the contest and good luck