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Your Bed Be Colored Dark

Hold on tight
we're in for quite a ride
with minds open wide
jerking me back and forth
leaping inside
intense sensations
enraging pleasure
burning treasure

Hold on tight
you just might looses your mind
in sins of mankind
within deep emotions
feelings entwined
all sprawled out on the
lovely vibrations
kiss temptations

Hold on tight
the walls just might come down
and in satin drown
silk prisons collapsing
supple on skin
dancing like fingers
endless caressing
lust distressing

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  • redrumdog31
    April 10, 2008

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    tis good here but at the end it doesn't make sence and it loses the rhythm a bit. other than that i really liked it.
    the forest vampire child.