The words climbed up to the ladder -
this is mind. Phrases that escaped
to find dominion in time's carousel.
Eased to cause not infraction, better
yet connection of spirit-filled
annotations.
Messages with deeds, to explore
to find openness, to revel in its
space, and reach the endeavors
of a Omni-present resource;
to descend into soul,lighting the match -
that awaits illumination.
A contest entry
- Open Theme- 500th Contest by CarolDesjarlais.
1200 points, ended April 12, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This sounds to me like what happens to writers a lot, when they have some idea or emotion that just keeps going round and round until they write it out. Am I interpreting this correctly?
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yes you are right. This isn't my best work, but at that time alot was going on in me and needed to be expressed.
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This is fascinating, abstract, ethereal, awesome creative phrasings, I love this!
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I liked this a lot. Excellent use of language, and this takes the reader on an intriguing journey! Loved it.
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A pen, a thought, a match that lights the way to have the language unfold. Nicely done!
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Oh my....beautiful! Pristine!
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ha
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interesting
I'm wondering which direction you had in mind for the reader to go, because this actually reads as kinda mysterious. It's surely very interesting though, i like it!
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Dez
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