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Love

A hug, A kiss, A smile, A wink,
If I feel depressed, You make me rethink.
We liked eachother all along,
You're a beacon of right In a world full of wrong.
A bright star on the darkest night,
Encouraging words, Everything'll be alright.

You know when I'm angry, How to calm me down,
You know to be serious, Or act like the clown
You will always be there, No matter what hour,
I dont know what it is, You just have some power.
You make me so happy, this is true,
I hope this shows How much I love you.

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A bit cheesey, But I havent written in ages.

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  • Awesome

    iLoved this poem it wasn`t cheesy at all...It`s how I feel right about now.!

  • emo001
    May 16, 2008
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    screw cheesy this is great


  • Blooming Poet
    April 12, 2008
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    cheesy is okay here. I love this poem.

  • daviscth silver member
    April 10, 2008

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    Nothing at all cheesey about this wonderful poem!! The rhyme and imagery are awesome. Thanks so much for posting it.

  • FindinSoundInSilence
    April 10, 2008
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    no it's not too cheesy... I like it
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